Monday, October 12, 2009

peoem 3 and 4

i was eating my food when i thought of this poem, and then it left me... here's recreating it.


feelings

none feel so dejected
as those coming back from war,
with scars in their eyes and hearts
from what they saw before

none feel so hungry
as those after a long winter storm
there's not enough food
out of everything they had to store

none feel so lost
as those driving alone at night
and no street signs or maps
to serve as their guide

and so,
none feel as i do
and to this i stay true
how i feel when i'm with
or without
you.

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if only someone to write that too!

and peoem4
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thinking about the past,
how it was so much better then,
how long will the present last?
so i could be happy again.